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give you me

how can i ask you to fall in love with me when i don't love myself?

how can i expect you to be attracted to the tainted image in the mirror that taunts me, screaming at me, the fire once in her eyes only dying embers, fighting for survival

she isnt someone who you should love,

she is someone you would walk past in the street,

wondering why her smile lay dormant

waiting for an earthquake, a fault line

so she could finally erupt

her heart caged by bulletproof glass, your hand on the trigger ready to pull

she was not the person she once was, only a shadow of her former self

yet you admired the darkness, a beaconing light allowing for her to be shown

she was tough and you loved her

you still do

- Hannah Comrie

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